Feedback on some music?

[baconhawka7x]

I know this isn't the correct place to be placing this, but the last few times I've posted my music on here, the feedback helped a ton.

I just made a new song for a remix competition. It's my first progressive house song, and I would really, really appreciate some feedback!

Here's the song: https://soundcloud.com/pledge-bass-musi ... edge-remix
And here's where I post all of my music: https://soundcloud.com/pledge-bass-music

Thanks for taking the time to read this. Again, I know this isn't something that really belongs on these forums, but the last time I posted on here, the criticism really helped me get better.

[veethree]

I like it. I noticed some issues with the mixing though, the vocals could be a bit louder, and it seems like they sometimes duck under the drums, this could be easily fixed by adjusting the settings on your master compressor if there is one.
But that's just nitpicking. Overall it's solid.

[notencore]

I really enjoyed the music and instrumentation, but I feel like there was some clipping on the voices that had them drowned out some times and grating during others, otherwise the song was fantastic.

[baconhawka7x]

Thanks! I'll be sure to mix the vocals in more carefully on my next track.

[shatterblast]

I like the song. It kind of seems like the bass drowns out the vocals at 2:20, but that's just my opinion.

Here's a song I would compare it to that i really like:

http://www.jamendo.com/en/track/56137/dangerous-groups